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Battle # 16 Aria VS Thongrider: Catagory - Meatloaf
« on: May 07, 2010, 12:45:57 AM »
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Re: Battle # 16 Aria VS Thongrider: Catagory - Meatloaf
« Reply #1 on: May 07, 2010, 05:02:11 PM »
Meatloafs in my mind

Verse 1

Things keep cooking up
deep inside of me
And I haven't figured out
What I am going to be
I wonder about so many things
that my heads turning around
And being stuck in the past
leaves me with a frown

Pre-chorus

Everything looks lame
and my head keeps spinning
My mind is playing games
but I don't seem to be winning

Chorus

I am twenty there is plenty
of time to make a plan
But I have doubt and I can't figure out
but the futures in my hand
And the world left me behind
that's the meatloafs in my mind

Verse 2

I need to grow up
and become a man
I am expected to have planned my life
before it even began
But my meat is be fried
And I am in the ovn
Was an antisocial guy
and missed out on lovin'

Pre-Chorus

I'm screwed up inside
And my head is still spinning
but I swallow my pride
as I cry I am grinning

Bridge

whoah oh oh
I'm eating meatloaf
Whoah oh oh
it's good not plain!
nananana
It's about to hit my mouth
nananana
but soon it's done the drain
just like my future
and my plans
and I forgot to wash my hands
whoah oh
I need to say:

The world seems so unkind
this is the meatloaf in my mind
whoah oh oh
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Re: Battle # 16 Aria VS Thongrider: Catagory - Meatloaf
« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2010, 05:31:29 PM »
My girlfriend's alright

My girlfriend's alright but she can't cook quite like you
and my girlfriend, she's alright but her smile's not as cute
yeah my girlfriend's alright but we have opposing views
She always disagrees with statements you and I would say are true

and my girlfriend's alright but she honestly can't sing
and girls who cannot sing to me are, in a way ugly
my girlfriend's alright but she doesn't read my songs
she just tells me they're amazing seconds after they're sent off

and my girlfriend's alright but she never likes to fight
and you and I would always love to cause it opened up our eyes
and showed us how much we cared, too in love to say goodbye
until you finally left, but thank God my new girlfriend's alright

Yeah, my girlfriend's alright but she talks about our future
like we're destined to get married and it really makes me hate her
my girlfriend's alright but she would prefer skywalker
to captain kirk and come on, you and I love William Shatner

my girlfriend's alright but she's pro DC, hates Marvel
and she refuses to clean my room while you would beg me every couple
days, that makes me wonder if she's even just alright
cause her meatloaf doesn't taste as good as yours on her best night

« Last Edit: May 07, 2010, 05:38:49 PM by Aria »

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Re: Battle # 16 Aria VS Thongrider: Catagory - Meatloaf
« Reply #3 on: May 07, 2010, 10:20:43 PM »
lol, thong riders lyrics remind me of my brief stint of attempting to be a lyricist when I was about 12-13 (yet still somehow worse) and trying to write songs for our first band

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Re: Battle # 16 Aria VS Thongrider: Catagory - Meatloaf
« Reply #4 on: May 08, 2010, 06:42:57 AM »
thongrider wins.

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Re: Battle # 16 Aria VS Thongrider: Catagory - Meatloaf
« Reply #5 on: May 10, 2010, 07:03:19 PM »
Thongriders made me laugh quite a lot, but Aria's is obviously better. Very thought out and clever.

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Re: Battle # 16 Aria VS Thongrider: Catagory - Meatloaf
« Reply #6 on: June 22, 2010, 01:27:32 AM »
This was Thongrider's best effort ever in my opinion hahaha
Aria, I like your lyrics dude. They would actually make a pretty nice song.

Only thing is, I think you both used the topic too metaphorically. Haha I literally would've written lyrics about meatloaf. I'm gonna give Thongrider this one cuz his lyrics crack me the fuck up :lol: He deserves a win by now anyway.



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